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Writing is an extremely complex process that requires the brain to do many
different things at once: form an idea, put that idea into words, think about
how to spell those words, consider what to capitalize and how to punctuate,
and remember how to form letters (or where to find them on a keyboard). In
addition, while one sentence is being written, the brain is likely racing
ahead to consider the next sentence! It is no wonder that so many
people--children and adults alike--struggle with writing.
The key to mastering the writing process is to break it into manageable
segments so that the writer can focus on one task at a time. For example,
while the first draft is being written, focus should be on getting the ideas
down; all thoughts about mechanical correctness should be temporarily set
aside. That important issue will receive attention later on.
The following 5-step process is geared toward helping struggling writers
overcome their reluctance and experience success. The steps involve planning,
dictating, copying, writing from dictation, and writing independently . All
of these steps will be followed on one short piece of writing. The five-step
process might be completed within one session or might be spread out over
several days.
Depending on the ability level of the student, the composition may range
from one sentence to a short paragraph. If the student gets involved in planning
and dictating a lengthy piece, select one paragraph to use in Steps 3, 4,
and 5--or at least complete these three steps on one paragraph before moving
on to another one.
(Although masculine pronouns have been used for convenience in describing
this process, they are intended to be universal and all-inclusive.)
1. Planning. Talk with the person about
what he will write. Instead of supplying a lot of information yourself, get
the writer to do the talking . Talking provides valuable rehearsal for
writing. Your role is to ask a lot of questions. Through questioning, help
the writer discover which parts of the composition could benefit from further
development, which parts may not be relevant to the current purpose, which
parts are not clear, which order of ideas is most effective, etc. (This step
is helpful to any writer, regardless of his level of experience
and expertise.)
2. Dictating. Have the person dictate
his composition to you or to another "scribe." Write down what the person
says. This frees the author to focus on content without having to think about
spelling, capitalization, punctuation, letter formation, or other subskills.
After the person has finished dictating, read the composition aloud so that
the author can hear how it sounds, focusing on the content in relation to
the planning that was done in Step 1. Ask if there are any changes he wants
to make. If there are, make them. It is fine if, in addition, the author
wants to read the composition himself.
Since the student will later copy what you have written from his dictation,
this step is most critical to having a piece of writing that is mechanically
correct. Even though the author has been relieved of the physical
process of writing (and the mechanical errors he might make have been prevented),
other errors can still creep in. He might use a wrong form of a verb, a
sentence fragment, etc. Errors should be corrected.
The correction process can take different forms. Some errors might simply
be corrected by you and not mentioned (unless, of course, the student asks
why the written form differs from what he dictated). Other corrections may
be discussed with the student. Corrections in this category should be limited
to a few that involve concepts somewhat familiar to the student
or at least within his understanding (things he is "ready" to learn). Generally
it is best for such discussions to take place after the dictation has been
completed so that the student's train of thought is not derailed during composition.
3. Copying. Have the person recopy the correct composition
(or the target section), paying close attention to capitalization, punctuation,
spelling, paragraphing, etc. The copy could be either handwritten or typed
on the computer, whichever would be easier for the student. When the student
has finished copying, have him check carefully for accuracy. Then check it
yourself, helping the student correct errors. You might help the student
find errors by saying something like "Is there a word in this line that should
be capitalized?" or "You have this word spelled two different ways--which
one is right?" For errors involving concepts that the student is not yet
able to understand, you can simply supply the correct form or you can leave
the error uncorrected.
4. Writing from Dictation. Have the person write the composition,
or target section, from your dictation. If you suspect the person is unable
to spell some words that will be needed, make those spellings available.
Let the student assume responsibility for capitalization and punctuation
rules he has mastered. For rules that are less familiar to him, give a brief
reminder of the correct form. Explanations are not needed at this point (unless
the student asks for them); the point is to have the student use correct
forms.
When the student has finished writing, have him read the composition aloud,
and perhaps silently, checking for correctness. Point out some of the things
the student has done correctly, especially those that involve newly
acquired (or developing) skills. You might also want to help students recognize
errors (as in Step 3). It is not necessary to find and correct every
error. The point is to gradually be acquiring skills.
5. Writing Independently. Have the student
write the composition, or the target section, without referring to earlier
versions. (The spelling list may still be used.) The goal is not to use
exactly the same words but to effectively express the ideas that have been
rehearsed.
When the person has finished writing, have him read the composition aloud,
and silently if he wishes, checking for content and errors. Let him correct
what he wants to correct. Talk with him about the things he has done correctly,
especially regarding content and new skills that are emerging.
This process is geared toward helping students use English correctly. Errors
are prevented by having students dictate their composition. Correct
forms are reinforced when students copy a correct version of
their composition. Spellings of difficult words are supplied in
Steps 4 and 5 so that the student can spell the words correctly. Especially
in the latter steps, feedback focuses on what students are doing right .
The more students use English correctly, the more familiar they
will become with the correct forms--and the more likely they will be to use
those forms in future writing. An English handbook enables students to quickly
and easily get the information they need in order to use English correctly.
Fran Santoro Hamilton's thirty-five years as teacher, writer, and editor
have enabled her to distill the English language to its essentials. Fran
is the author of Hands-On English, an English handbook that makes
grammar visual, and she cosponsors The Grannie Annie Family Story
Celebration. Fran provides many free resources at www.GrammarAndMore.com.
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